Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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modern day, foreigners are interested in travelling in order to learn the different cultures and tourism destinations from other countries. I personally think, they should be paid extra more than the local residents.

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, the fund tickets can be used to the societal development and improvable facilities. Money that gains from tourism should be contributed to the economy to develop important sites

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as temples and monuments.

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, in

cambodia

a nation in southeastern Asia; was part of Indochina under French rule until 1946

Cambodia

each foreign visitors have to pay ten dollars to look around the temples.

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fund

are used

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is used

to construct the roads, so that it would be easier for tourists come to visit.

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, the government could create new places which attract more tourists to visit.

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, the popularity of tourism might create employment for the local residents.

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, they might run the business for many facilities in order to develop their own society.

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, tourists funds

might be contribute

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might contribute

to improve the facilities.

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means the local residents might afford to the tourist services,

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, the resort tickets should be paid for toilet or water supplies. Some areas are damaged because of old-ages and break down,

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, it should be either

rebuild

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rebuilt

or replaced new ones.

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those

plural of "this"

these

facilities can be the

evident

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evidences

evidence

which is important for the tourist to see and learn about the culture heritage of the country.

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, tourists would like to spend massive amount of money to explore in many other countries. To sum up, the extraordinary of money that gain from overseas tourists are used for the societal development

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as infrastructure.

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, some facilities are improved through the tickets funds. In spite of

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, the charge from tourists should be fairly contributed to develop the tourist destination in the countries.

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