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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrated table shows data about consumer spending on three important items in five major countries in 2002 The table shows that Sweden spends less money on eatable things,
although
 Turkey has spent
most
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the most
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. Italy, Spain and Sweden have
an
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approximately the same numbers. Italy has the biggest number
on
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of
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 clothes (9.00%),
while
 Sweden spends 5.40% on
it
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them
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. Ireland (6.63%), Spain (6.51%),
Turkey
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and Turkey
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 (6.63%) is nearly the same.
Percentage
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The percentage
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 of Spain shows that it has,
the
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less consumer spending on education, but Turkey has the biggest one.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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