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Now the machines are very complex and a lots of work is automated. Does this machines automation have more pros than ons.

#machines #lots #work #automation #ons
INTRODUCTION- Undoubtedly, in
this
 technological advanced era, machines are considered
to complete
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complete
 complicated works. I intend that use of it has definitely brought much more benefits than drawbacks, as due to these machines, people's
work
 stress has been reduced extremely, whereas it has boosted
country's economy
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the country's economy
. In the positive effects, use of machines
has dropped
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is dropping
 daily routine
work
 time. Today, machines do not require Human's attention and can do
work
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the work
 by themselves just after pushing the 'on' button, by which people have left enough hours to spend with familiars.
For
example these
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example, these
day's
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days
 women are only one switch away to wash clothes and dishes by using washing machine and dishwasher, which both activities were taking half of the day before the invention of machines
Moreover
, machines have accelerated nation's development. Machines are becoming
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 of business sectors, which produces massive amount of products with consuming less energy as well as time. As a consequence, one region can produce enough not only to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 country's needs but
also
 of other land's, through which producing nation can earn billions of dollars, which strengthens their economy. In downside, because of
over use
exploitation to the point of diminishing returns
overuse
 of machines, millions of unskilled people have lost their job.
For instance
, in
past
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the past
,
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,
 in car making company thousands of people were required to joint and make different
parts but
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parts, but
 now, all
work
 is being done by robotics. In conclusion, even though the introduction of machines
have
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has
 some demerits, I strongly deem that benefits are
outweighs
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outweighed
 disadvantages, as negative aspect can be avoided if
unskilled worker
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an unskilled worker
 strive to learn some working skills.
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