The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
This
given line graph illustrates emissions
of carbon dioxide per person between
4 decades in the United Kingdom, Change preposition
over
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal. Overall
, Sweden
and United
Kingdom decreased between 4-12 from Correct article usage
the United
high
point, it can be seen Italy and Portugal increased between 4-8 metric Add an article
a high
the high
tones
until 2007.
Beginning with diminished countries, Correct your spelling
tonnes
United
Kingdom was in the apex, nearly 11 Correct article usage
the United
tones
in 1967, after 1967 United Kingdom’s CO2 emissions
per person slightly reduced almost
8 until 2007. Change preposition
by almost
As
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A
a
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apply
second
, number
of Correct article usage
the number
tones
of
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in
Sweden
soared over
10 and it sharply fell Change preposition
to over
nearly
3 Change preposition
to nearly
tones
in 1987. After 1987, it reduced and stayed below 6 in 2007.
In the contrast, Italy and Portugal’s CO2 emissions
increased from 0-5 metric tones
. Italy’s figure almost doubledCorrect your spelling
tons
,
and made it Remove the comma
apply
second
highest CO2 emissions
country by 2007. Portugal’s emissions
increased nearly
4 Change preposition
by nearly
tones
by 1987. Correct your spelling
tonnes
After
this
it rose sharply over 5 metric Add a comma
,this
tones
in 1997. And it increased until to be same Correct your spelling
tonnes
with
Change preposition
as
Sweden
by 2007.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, sweden, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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