Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experiences.

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Planning for marriage and giving birth to kids have been very common in current days after the age of 30.
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essay agrees that
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is the positive evolution.
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essay
firstly
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, discuss the economic stability of the married couple, and personal
time
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they give to each other before having kids.
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with,
couple
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the couple
a couple
couples
will have
the good
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better
the best
earnings before they get married and have
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
. In current days, getting
settle
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settled
down in
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
care
has been very difficult for everyone because there is
large competition
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a large competition
in every field. So, if they take
time
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for marriage and kids it will be better
for them earn
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for them to earn
some money and survive in
future
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the future
.
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, schooling fees are increasing day by day and all the living
expences
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
are
also
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going high so that, taking
time
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for kids and marriages is a better option at early 30's.
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, After getting married every couple should have some
time
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to spend
for
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to
each other.
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they will get
time
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after
kids
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the kids
, but having
time
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only between themselves is
best way
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the best way
to understand
eachother
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each other
and be happy rest of the life.
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, if they don't get
time
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and understand each other which may lead to divorce or family disputes as we see
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in many countries. In conclusion,
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essay supports the idea that getting marriage relation and giving birth to kids after 30 years old is the best decision to lead happy for
entire life
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the entire life
and to have
good amount
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a good amount
of
savind
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to survive with families.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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