Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experiences.

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Planning for marriage and giving birth to kids have been very common in current days after the age of 30.

This

essay agrees that

this

is the positive evolution.

This

essay

firstly

, discuss the economic stability of the married couple, and personal

time

they give to each other before having kids.

To begin

with,

couple

Suggestion

the couple

a couple

couples

will have

the good

Suggestion

better

the best

earnings before they get married and have

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

. In current days, getting

settle

Suggestion

settled

down in

carrer

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

care

has been very difficult for everyone because there is

large competition

Suggestion

a large competition

in every field. So, if they take

time

for marriage and kids it will be better

for them earn

Suggestion

for them to earn

some money and survive in

future

Suggestion

the future

For example

, schooling fees are increasing day by day and all the living

expences

amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)

expenses

are

also

going high so that, taking

time

for kids and marriages is a better option at early 30's.

On the other hand

, After getting married every couple should have some

time

to spend

for

Suggestion

each other.

Although

they will get

time

after

kids

Suggestion

the kids

, but having

time

only between themselves is

best way

Suggestion

the best way

to understand

eachother

Suggestion

each other

and be happy rest of the life.

For example

, if they don't get

time

and understand each other which may lead to divorce or family disputes as we see

this

in many countries. In conclusion,

this

essay supports the idea that getting marriage relation and giving birth to kids after 30 years old is the best decision to lead happy for

entire life

Suggestion

the entire life

and to have

good amount

Suggestion

a good amount

savind

to survive with families.

Wed Apr 22 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

255 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experiences.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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