the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games

With regards to the positive effects, playing
game
can develop some skills of
children
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children, such
such
as: cognitive skills, solving problems skills. Many games required children abstract and level thinking to win the
game
.
For example
, they have to
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follow
the instructions and use suggesting to think the solution of the problems in games.Not only that, playing video games
also
increases the ability to work in groups and know how to set a
goals
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goal
.
For instance
, in multiple games,
player
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the player
have
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has
to work in a team and fight together, children can learn the way to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
others opinions from that.
In contrast
, overplaying can cause some negative impact on them
.
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.
Children can be addicted to
game
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gaming
and distracted with other works
such
as: learning or active activities. The other disadvantage is that some
game
obtain
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obtains
violent content and
this
violence repeat again and again.
For instance
, many games involve children helping their character to kill, kick, stab and shoot.
This
may lead to increased aggressive feelings, thoughts, and behaviours
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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