Do you agree or disagree that animals should be kept in men made cells.

I disagree that

animals

should be kept in

men made

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cells. I feel that

zoos

are an unsuitable environment for

animals

and

therefore

should be abolished.

Firstly

,

zoo

animals

are kept in very confined

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compared with their vast natural habitat.

Due to

this

zoo

animals

develop unnatural habits like pacing back and forth or swaying from side to side.

For example

, polar bears are given about 10 metres of walking space

where as

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in their arctic home they roam for hundreds of

kilometers

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.

Similarly

, lions and tigers are confined in cages where they lack exercise and stimulation. What is more, it is very common for visitors to tease and provoke caged

animals

.

This

also

leads to unnatural

behavior

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in

animals

.

Secondly

, the breeding programmes taken up by

zoos

are not very successful. For instance, the ‗Panda Breeding Programme‘ has been very costly and unsuccessful.

Also

,

zoo

life does not prepare

animals

for the challenges of life in the wild. They are provided good food in the

zoos

, but if left in the jungle, they may die of starvation because they cannot hunt for themselves.

Finally

, the

zoo

is an unnatural environment that exposes

animals

to many dangers. Diseases often spread between species that would never live together naturally. For example, many Asian elephants have died in African

zoos

after catching herpes from African elephants. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that,

zoos

are unnatural habitats for

the

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wild

animals

and there is no justification

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caging these

marvelous

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creatures of God.