You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it

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Dear John, How's your trip going ? I'm just writing a letter to tell you about something

happened

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last

night. unfortunately, while

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was reading

magazine

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a magazine

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then

at that time I

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heard

heared

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heard

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a noisy sound. I was really scared of it. After few minutes, a massive

strom

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storm

coming from

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the North

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North side

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Northside

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had hit your House and damaged It from

Saveral

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Several

palaces. it had almost

destroy

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destroyed

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your garden because there is no wall to cover all the plants.

furthermore

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not only roof tiles were smashed but

also

broken

galss

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glass

of all windows. Since

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the roof has got many gaps, so we have to fill it with new tiles as soon as possible. if

this

place will empty without tiles

then

it should be difficult to live here in

this

rainy season.

Although

we Have to

conatct

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contact

connect

carpenter

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the carpenter

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to fix all these windows with new glasses. It should

be prevent

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us from animals and insects. Don't worry about all these works.

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and my Friend will handle it. Have a nice trip and see you soon. Best wishes Hardeep

kumar

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Kumar

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Wed Apr 22 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

179 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it

people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. Are you agree or desagree?

Human activities have had a very negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about the problem, while others believe effective action can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations