You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it

Dear John, How's your trip going ? I'm just writing a letter to tell you about something

happened

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that happened

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last

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night. unfortunately, while

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was reading

magazine

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a magazine

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then

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at that time I

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heard

heared

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heard

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a noisy sound. I was really scared of it. After few minutes, a massive

strom

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storm

coming from

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the North

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North side

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Northside

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had hit your House and damaged It from

Saveral

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Several

palaces. it had almost

destroy

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destroyed

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your garden because there is no wall to cover all the plants.

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furthermore

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not only roof tiles were smashed but

also

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broken

galss

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glass

of all windows. Since

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apply

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the roof has got many gaps, so we have to fill it with new tiles as soon as possible. if

this

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place will empty without tiles

then

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it should be difficult to live here in

this

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rainy season.

Although

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we Have to

conatct

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contact

connect

carpenter

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the carpenter

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to fix all these windows with new glasses. It should

be prevent

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prevent

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us from animals and insects. Don't worry about all these works.

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and my Friend will handle it. Have a nice trip and see you soon. Best wishes Hardeep

kumar

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Kumar

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Apr 22, 2020

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Word repetition
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

179 words

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Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Animals are in danger of extinxion. Some people say that we should protected only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?