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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encourage. What extent do you agre?

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It is often argued that
growing number
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a growing number
 of population
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,
nowadays, is having health issues,
as a result
 of modern ways of life
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,
which are not curable by the latest advanced drugs.
However some
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However, some
 have
point
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a point
 of view to fall back to the conventional modes of
treatment
 for
such
 cases.In my view
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,
current methods of
treatment
 are far better than
old ways
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the old ways
 of
cure
.
this
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This
 essay will examine both views before a final conclusion is drawn. On the one hand,
conentional
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
 methods of
treatment
 remained a source of satisfaction and
cure
 for population by
utilization
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utilizing
 the natural resources
.
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.
For example
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,
in china
,
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,
several herbs are being still used
for
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to
cure
 of many
such
 diseases which cannot be treated by latest medication.The Shanghai Times reported in March 2010 that cancer of multiple organs in
body
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the body
have been treated
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has been treated
 by using
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
 herbs and it was the most recommended mode of
treatment
 exclusively in some cancers.So from these examples
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we can derive the positive ramifications of the
conevtional
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
 methods in medical science.
On the other hand
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with the advancement of medical technology
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,
cure
 is possible for a number of diseases
,
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,
consequently
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,
this
methods
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method
 has a number of positive
imapcts
the striking of one body against another
impacts
 in current medication.
Firstly
,
for
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For
 almost every disease
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,
drugs are readily available
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,
though sometimes
expensive but
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expensive, but
 hopes are there for
cure
.
Secondly
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,
if we consider
surgical aspect
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surgical aspects
the surgical aspect
 of
treatment
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treatment, then
then
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,
it outweighs the
conventinal
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
 ways of
treatment
.
For instance
, in many advanced cities
,
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,
treatment
 is done by
use
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the use
 of robots as well.
this
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This
 can be exemplified by one survey
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,
recently
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
 in
USA
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the USA
 which showed the comparison between new modes of
treatment
 as compared to conservative methods.
results
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The results
Results
 were
surprisingly
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surprised
surprising
 in the favour of latest technology. To conclude
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,
cure
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the cure
 should be
achieved whether
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achieved, whether
 its by latest technology or by
conventional method
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the conventional method
a conventional method
conventional methods
,
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,
however
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people are having faith and trust in newer methods for
treatment
.
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