The diagram below shows how cocoa beans are prepared for export to countries that make chocolate.

The diagram below shows how cocoa beans are prepared for export to countries that make chocolate.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how cocoa beans are prepared for export to countries that make chocolate.
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first
stage
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of the preparatory work of cocoa
beans
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before export to countries that make chocolate is
fermentation
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the fermentation
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stage
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. First of all, the ripe pod need to be picked from the cocoa trees
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then
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and then
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made them become
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beans
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and pulp. After that, put the
beans
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and pulp
on to
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onto
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the banana leaves for 6 days in
sun
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the sun
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. For
this
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progress, the
beans
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would turn purple to brown. The
second
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stage
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of
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diagram is drying. In
this
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stage
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, the
beans
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were raised
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on mats
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for 10 to 20 days and sack the dried
beans
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separately that sent
them
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to the local agent. The
last
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stage
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of the diagram is export. But before export to the countries, it
need
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needs
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to
been took
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take
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weighing and checked for quality. And the local agent would
paid
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pay
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the money to farmers
after
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this
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work is done. Finish all of
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this progress
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,
the
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cocoa
beans
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can be sent to countries successfully.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, beans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultivation
  • Harvesting
  • Fermentation
  • Drying
  • Transportation
  • Collection centers
  • Quality control
  • Export
  • Global trade
  • Chocolate production
  • Packing
  • Inspection
  • Sorting
  • Mechanical dryers
  • Mold growth prevention
  • Sacks
  • Pests
  • Diseases
  • Cocoa pods
  • Flavor development
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