the following diagrams show a current map of peyton park and a plan for proposed changes
The diagram illustrates a plan for the Peyton garden at the moment and what it will be
in
the future Change preposition
like in
by
renovation work.
At the Change preposition
with
present
the map Add a comma
,present
show
the tennis court Change the verb form
shows
in
the left side Change preposition
on
from
the lake, Change preposition
of
whereas
in the future it will be remove
to Change the verb form
be removed
right
side Correct article usage
the right
from
the lake and Change preposition
of
it
will be developed the lake through added Correct pronoun usage
apply
swimming
dock, and change the picnic area from the middle of Peyton Park in the north to the right side in the north.
Correct article usage
a swimming
Additionally
, the playground will be added in the Northwest area for children
Finally
, the parking lot will be staying in the south.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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