Many parents today employ private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is a trend to occupy the children with
study
and race of the higher academic score forced many parents to hire a teacher after school
. This
essay will consider it as a negative development because children give less importance to school
teaching and become a spoon-feeding learner.
The importance of school
learning reduces due to many students attend personal tuition
for children know that somebody will teach them with individual attention after school
. The private tutor takes feedback from their students and makes sure that children focus on what
Suggestion
what's
been
taught. the state or fact of existing
being
However
, in a school
teaching children study
in a large number of group
in a class which give them a chance to less focus during the lectures. Suggestion
groups
For example
, a recent study
shows that 60% of the audience doesn’t like to see the same repeated programs, telecast or lectures if they already attend
once. Suggestion
have already attended
Therefore
, not only does private solo class discourage children for better learning but
Accept comma addition
learning, but
also
lower the value of school
.
Although
some students have a different level of understanding which could not possible to achieve with classroom study
in a given time; in my opinion, many students use to learn from one
to one
tuition
only, and they are not able to learn from themselves
. objective case of they
them
This
situation has generated when student always relies on teacher and do not use their comprehensive skill to understand something and their intelligence curtailed. To illustrate, the University of New York surveyed secondary school
’s students in the USA and found a result that out of 70% students whose take tuition
after school
have less IQ even though they perform well in their syllabus. This
survey shows that students can score higher in their exams, but their learning skills are still limited.
In conclusion, school
classroom teaching’s value and children’s ability to learning
by own are Suggestion
learn
reducing
by the development of private Suggestion
reduced
tuition
after school
. This
essay has shown that one
on one
teaching has detrimental developments for children.Submitted by shabinadevgan on
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