Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have a positive impact. Discuss both views.

Various parents satisfy all desires children, by buying and doing whatever their kids. In my

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is not the optimal way of parenting,

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liberated upbringing can lead to awful consequences as they get older.

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kind of upbringing can be very substandard and if you want to raise well-behaves and respectful children, discipline is necessary.

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, you should set clear boundaries, and be able to say no when your child goes against these limits and rules. I think that parents who do the opposite are actually doing more harm than good, failing their children rather being kind to them.

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method of upbringing has several inferior consequences. The

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and the most oblivious is that these children will become selfish and self-centred adults who will show little consideration about other’s needs or feelings. One of the consequences of

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an attitude is that these adults cannot work in teams with their colleagues and teammates. The

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negative trait could be

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. Living without boundaries is likely to lack the patience to wisely make proper decisions. To illustrate,

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can lead to compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity. In conclusion, parents should teach their children to self control and respect for others.

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will lead to awful consequences like selfishness or impulsiveness