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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the eon of digitalisation, where the number of online readers of news is increasing day by day, but at the same time there is a wide section of society, which is still fond of the conventional way to know about the world through printed
newspaper
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. Despite the ascending trend of online reading, the numerous population still prefers the printed
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 due to various reasons.
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, for many it has become a habit to start their morning with the
newspaper
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.
Further
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, many people believe that publication and distribution of newspapers help many families to run their homes and it is good for a stable economy.
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, reading a
newspaper
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 put less strain on the eyes of the reader,
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 maintaining good eyesight for years.Apart from that, reading a
newspaper
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 is more satisfactory in comparison of reading online.
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, the importance of print media cannot be ignored over digital media.
On the other hand
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, the worth of online reading is undeniable d
ue
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Due
to its accessibility.
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, an individual can at any time can access to online news at his or her comfort.Whereas, to infer the knowledge from a
newspaper
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, one has to be in the physical possession of the same.
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 to
this
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 one can select the categories of news one has interest in.For illustration, a sports enthusiast can limit the information on his screen only to sport news and,
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 s
aving
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Saving
a lot o
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Of
his or her precious time.
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, online reading fits into present eon. In a nutshell, it could be concluded that even though online reading is most appreciated method to access news for many
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,
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 the worth of printed media is not d
imnished
impaired by diminution
diminished
as there is h
uge part
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a huge part
of p
opulation,
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the population
 which still is client of printed news.
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