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Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Agree or disagree

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Who are better prepared to
face
adulthood
 problem - children brought up either in destitute condition or wealthier family? Some think that children from lower-class
background
 are good to handle a hassle in adult life than those from rich class. I agree with
this
 view as
such
 children, know the
value
 of
money
 and they become independent. Knowing the
value
 of
money
 is an obvious reason which assists destitute children to cope up well with the problem of
adulthood
. Even though these children do not have their own bedroom, enough
money
 to fulfil their wish and often study under a street light, unlike rich children, they try to be ecstatic with whatever they have. Due to not having luxurious things, resulting in them knowing the actual
value
 of
money
.
For example
, a recent report by the Times of India in January 2019 found that 60% of children from weak financial
background
 recognize the
value
 of
money
 than those from high-class children during their
adulthood
. Being independent is another imperative reason. To elucidate, parents’ of poor children do not have much to offer them
such
 as the best university, education or luxurious life. So, their guardian allows them to do a part-time job and pursue their dreams with relentless efforts.
As a result
, they tend to be independent. Owing to
this
 independence, they are ever ready to
face
 obstacles during adult life.
For example
, a survey conducted by Harvard University revealed that 68% of children who are from poor
background
 are independent and able to persist studies by holding down a part-time job to those children who are from the rich class
background
. In conclusion,
although
 it is believed by some people that children from lavish family are much prepared to
face
 a problem, knowing the
value
 of
money
 and being independent both qualities are essential to
face
adulthood
 challenges which I think poor children possess more to other rich children.
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