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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

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I think that success is usually associated with careful planning and taking risks. If you have a chance to get a great promotion, but you do not prepare anything to show yourself to have ability to do that, you can loss it. Sometimes, you calculate everything carefully, but the environment
change
, or there is another unexpected event
happen
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happening
, maybe you failed.
Therefore
, I think that we must
plan
 carefully, seize an
opportunities
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opportunity
 and evaluate events many times when necessary. I believe that careful planning has a very important role in
success
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the success
.
For instance
, when you begin to do research, you must read
many many
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many, many
 textbooks, you calculate the data that you will take them, how to analysis, what you need, what you expect in your research, what the difficulties that you can face when you do research… You must intend how to resolve if they happen. Careful planning-essential for utilizing our time and energy properly. Even with the careful
plan
, changes occur unexpectedly. Sometimes, you intend that you with
get
Suggestion
getting
 something, but you will get
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 things.
For example
, Christopher Columbus was a global navigation, he thought that he was looking for India, but he discovered America. Or when I intended to go to the forest to find a kind of mushroom, I found out another mushroom that
parasitize
an animal or plant that lives in or on a host (another animal or plant); it obtains nourishment from the host without benefiting or killing the host
parasite
 on the
lavae
the immature free-living form of most invertebrates and amphibians and fish which at hatching from the egg is fundamentally unlike its parent and must metamorphose
larvae
love
 of the cicada. That was amazing
!
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!
 I think that I take
advantages
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advantage
 of new things as they occur. Another view, if events happen against to your
plan
, you should
change
 direction to resolve the difficulties. You are a medical doctor. You like to work in the department of intensive care unit, but your health is not good to be on duty all night without sleeping.
It
Suggestion
Its
 effect to your heart because you have congenital heart disease. So you must
change
 to another department to appropriate for your health. It is important to make mistakes in your work, and
then
 you
change
 your plans when necessary. In my opinion, you will succeed when you have a chance. But you need
plan
Suggestion
to plan
 carefully before starting to get advantages of each opportunity and
change
 your
plan
 flexibly if necessary.
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