Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions. While some people argue in support of a cashless society, claiming that it is beneficial to citizens, others raise concerns about security. Which side of this argument do you, personally, agree with, and why?

In a globalized world, with the continuous development of technology industries, many countries are gradually coming to a

cashless

society

. It is thought that

this

trend will bring good results to

people

's life. Other

people

,

however

, believe that it will have a negative impact on social security. Personally, I agree with the first view. Some

people

argue that the government should not advance to

cashless

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society

because if citizens use electronic

payment

, there may be leaks of personal information or boundaries between the rich and poor.

However

, it is a short-sighted look.

Due to

the industrialization -

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and

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modernization of the world, if a country wants a foothold, the use of electronic

payment

become

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becomes

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more and more essential. Digital transactions

helps

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the government minimize social evils and the human

society

to be more advanced.

In addition

, illegal transactions typically take place with cash so that there’s no record of the transaction and so that the seller can be certain about getting paid. Take

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trade as an example, these transactions are stealthily carried out in cash.

This

trend is a major obstacle for the country's development.

Moreover

, if

people

use electronic

payment

, they will be more convenient in trading activities. For example, with units selling goods,

services

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and services

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, electronic

payment

helps deploy and provide services quickly; assess, categorize and expand customer base through electronic data mining; improve operational efficiency and minimize risks and costs for storage, rotation,

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and

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cash handling.

This

tendency will help the country's economy expand and improve.

Therefore

, it is no doubt that a

cashless

society

not only takes the country away from social evils but it

also

helps its nation to improve

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and economic side.

Nevertheless

, a

cashless

society

is not completely perfect. When the e-commerce

industries

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industry

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grow

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grows

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, information security becomes more and more dangerous. Today, there have been many identity thefts and privacy

invasion

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invasions

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of

people

when using electronic

payment

. Because of

this

reason, electronic

payment

does not receive the consent of all

people

in the world.

However

,

besides

that, the government has been spending a lot of money, implementing many plans to ensure the security and safety of the information technology system in the banking industry;

protect

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and protect

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customers' legitimate rights and interests.

Thus

, countries should not only see the good side of digital

payment

software but

also

the bad ones to overcome. In conclusion,

although

cashless

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a cashless

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society

has a few problems, these have been improved. In my opinion, if a nation wants to progress and develop, the emergence of

cashless

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a cashless

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society

is indispensable.