Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behavior and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extend do you agree?

Children are the building blocks of the nation and how they should be raised is

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a matter

of utmost prominence.Parents and

teachersperceive

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teachers perceive

that

imposingnumerous

rules make children better person and save them from mis happening.

On the contrary

, it has rather detrimental effects on Mental and physical growth of children. Evidently

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the central idea

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to various

reasons. The

first

reason is

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Effecting

physical health. It is sometime said if there are rules children will inculcate good

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

,

otherwise

they will become crook or thief, and adapt ill habits

such

as drinking when grown up, which to some extent is true but,

Consequently

, they should not forget that excess of everything is bad. Due to excess restrictions they are prone to become depressed and unhealthy. It is often seen that children when raised in free environment are energetic,

moreover they

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moreover, they

become extrovert and ripen decision making power.

For example

, my niece is being raised with greater freedom very limited rules, she is active & holds

first

position in academics as well as

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choosing

her extracurricular activities on her own.

This

brings to my

second

point

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Supporterscontemplate that adolescents raised under strict rule are more likely to become

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a better person

better person

better people

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This

may be

true

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true, however

however

, I would argue that, restrictions make them submissive and

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to it their brain remains under developed which in return limits their thinking pattern and can never think out of the box. Substantially, the research conducted by Indian Psychological institute reflects out of hundred fifty percent of children with

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more open

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environment were

more creative than children with rules.

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All parents and

teachershould

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teacher should

ask themselves a question that “how close is our child with us?”

If, not much

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Much, if not, then

Much, if not then

then

they should mend their directions in

such

a way that

their

people in general

they

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becomes

stronger and friendlier. Closer they

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become, the

less chance of their children to become rebellious. To summarize,

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make less active or intense

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acknowledges

rules are

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important for

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understanding of

understanding on

right and wrong

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without obstructing the growth of children. Parents and teachers should consider them as

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the bud

of rose and should nourish the with love and care. Their role should be more of

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a facilitator

than dictator.