The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The given line graph illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
parcels
delivered by FedEx
and TNT
over a
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an
80 year
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80-year
period
from 1920 to 2000. Overall
, the number of parcels
from FedEx
rose slightly despite violent fluctuations whereas
the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
parcels
delivered by TNT
increased dramatically. In addition
, at the start of the period
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,period
FedEx
had more delivered parcels
,which was replaced by TNT
from 1985 to 2000.
First looking at
the Change preposition
apply
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
parcels
by FedEx
in 1920 was approximately 15000 then
it reach a peak at under 25000 in 1940 .Afterwards
it declined sharply to the lowest point in the Add a comma
,Afterwards
period
, but this
rose gradually to under 20000 in the final year.
In contrast
, the trend of parcels
delivered by TNT
increased dramatically throughout the period
. In 1920 it was approximately 5000 which increased by about 20000 and reached the number of FedEx
in 1985 but more sharply to reach a peak at about 25000 in 2000.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words parcels, fedex, tnt, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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