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The government should allocate more funding to teaching science Rather than the other subjects in order to develop and progress.

#government #science #subjects #progress
I totally agree that education is based on the experiment.Learning is based on the teaching because people are learning through teaching and some people are learning through experience.
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, the government should allocate more funding to teach information because they want new research for the development of the country. Development is supplement important for the country. I believe that other liable is important for social and political point of view. Most of the exams are based on the social science , math
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