Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When the issue of citizen’s importance comes into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Truth be told, individuals’ role in developments has generated much discussion recently. Some people believe that any new
developments
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developer
can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. Personally, I completely disagree with the idea that individuals can do nothing to
change
society
for the following reasons. Some people are inclined to work with others, think that only the authorities and large institutions can bring about new developments. I don’t think
this
argument is valid because a large institution is shaped by individuals, which means that without individuals, the institution will find it difficult doing everything. The governments maybe can make a big decision, but it is not to say that individuals don’t have any affection! Citizens who on the government’s side
also
say that individuals can do nothing to
change
society
. I disagree with
this
too, as I think everyone have their own way to do that or contribute to the country’s development. They can do charity by their own substances, including money, clothes, necessity,... Or devote their knowledge, ideas....
For example
, Thomas Edison is a scientist, inventor and a businessman who invented many devices that affected our lives. And now, the whole world benefits from his idea.
This
directly suggests that, individuals
also
can exert an influence on developments and help to
change
society
. I strongly believe that individuals can incorporate small
change
in their daily routines, which will
then
sum up to be a big
change
in
society
. Some individual action seems quite small and did not bring much influence, but in fact, it's maybe bring great impact on the community.
Moreover
, we suppose that only large institutions can make a
change but
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change, but
have we ever thought about how to set up an
organization
? Of course, we don’t often think about it. To form an
organization
or a group of people, we need a founder or a leader.
That is
exactly why each individual is very important in changing
society
. Take Hermann Gmeiner as a perfect example, he is the founder of the SOS children’s village which is an international non-profit
organization
to help and protect the orphans, wandering and missed children. It was founded in 1949 and now ranked 33 out of 100 non-profit
organization
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organizations
in the world “for global influence”. What can be inferred from
this
is an individual’s action can
also
have a big impact on the
change
and development of
society
. In conclusion, I would say that nobody should underestimate each individual’s contribute or effort to
change
because every major
change
in
society
comes from personal
change
. Anyone can make a big impact in
society
without governments and large institutions.

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