Research shows business meetings and business trainings are done online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Although
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in the past, most of the work meeting was in the special space and all members should participate there, nowadays by coming technologies in our life, part of these meetings can do online. In
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essay we talk about the advantages and disadvantages of online meeting and business trainings. One advantage of
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argues, is for saving
time
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. In other hand, if you can participate in online meeting or
field training you
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field training, you
can save a lot of
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before or after the meeting.
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, if we have a meeting at 10 am in the office, we should spend a huge moment in the morning traffic.
After
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Over
long
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that we are so tired we should go to the meeting.
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, we don't have maximum creativity. So, for saving
time
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, online meeting is the best option that business manager can make a plan for that.
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Second benefit
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A second benefit
is related to participate of 90% of members there. It is common that all members can't available on
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exactly
the same
time
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for arriving in session. Because they don't know what happen on the way. It depends on traffic etc. But they can use their phone and participate in online meeting from anywhere.
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, in the train.
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, some people think that online meeting it's not effective. They said that during the meeting it happens that we need signatures or take something like paper or document from your friend.
This
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person disagrees with online meeting because something in
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session are not achievable. In conclusion, saving
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and participate from anywhere in business meeting is the most advantage of online meetings.
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, I agree with
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view. I believe we live in a modern world and it's so important for us that using all technology and save our
time
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and spent that for catching the other our aims.

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