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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter- * What have you learned while working for the company? * Did you enjoyed working there? * What are you reasons for leaving the job?

Dear Mr Musk, I hope
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, these three years of work improved me immensely, not just my practical skills , it enhanced my ability to communicate with customers effectively.
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, I learned how to manage marketing campaigns in various channels. I have been doing
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 am passionate about it.
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 from the knowledge and experienced management, colleagues are kind and supportive. Working in your company has been one of my top achievements so far. As you
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, I finished my
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 marketing at the University of Texas. I suppose it is a great time to move to the next step in my career. I will be searching for a new job related to marketing or sales. Thank you for your support and help. I wish your business every success in the future.

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task response
Be clear on the reason you leave and when your last day is.
grammar
Fix flow and cap I and proper names; use one thought per sentence.
coherence
Put one idea in each paragraph. Start with thanks, then say what you learned, then your leave reason, then next steps.
tone
Polite and respectful tone throughout
content
Mentions learning and your next plan
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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