1. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I wholeheartedly agree that prevention is better than

cure

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cure, although

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many people might not agree with me. According to me being able to prevent people from getting diseases ranging from the most deadly to even the common ones like cough and cold

is

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of great value to the society. Every person in the world wants to lead a healthy and happy life without any diseases. To achieve that the governments of every nation are allocating large proportions of the health budget towards health education and preventive measures which is beneficial for the citizens of the respective nation. People need knowledge of how to avoid getting different diseases which should be provided by the medical world, who have gained that through experiments and discoveries. Prevention is

important but

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important, but

at the same time finding a cure

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needs to be done as prevention might not be able to completely eradicate the disease and people will get sick. The government needs to promote and guide people to take preventive measures as much as possible to minimize the number of cases for any disease. At the same time should not neglect to find a cure for deadly diseases, by providing the required support. The more the government spends on

healthcare

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health care

equally

high

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higher

will be the return in terms of profits for the nation as fewer people are getting sick.

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it can be said that the government should spend a large proportion of its budget educating the people and making sure they follow the guidance to gain the fruits in the future, at the same time it should not neglect expenses on finding cures for various diseases.