At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent times, some nations have a

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high

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younger

people than older. Indeed,

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fact has both advantages and disadvantages. I opine that positive implications of having a youthful

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over-weigh the negative ones.

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essay will discuss the merits and demerits with examples to support both points of view. Unfortunately, having younger people could lead to lack of people who are professionals in the society.

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is to say that older

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may be more educated than the young one as they have had more time to study during their lives.

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, to become a specialist in physician, at least 10 years of university study

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may not be able for a young adult because of time and age.

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, youthful

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is in general more active and happier. By

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I mean, they have less old age- associated illness which

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them to work more and maintain them-self to keep active. Adding to

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fact that healthy people can work more efficiently, with

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they can contribute to

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the economy

of the nation, making money rather than spending it.

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, it is fact that old society either spends lots of money

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health care for their senior citizen or on some amusement activities. Another positive aspect of youngest

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is that there are more chances of having outstanding sports professionals.

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, youth is more dynamic and more energetic than

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older

people to practice and become sports professional.

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, in soccer most players retire from their soccer-career when they turn thirty years old. With old people there would be no time to start a sport career. In conclusion, with the arguments given above, I firmly believe that

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the advantages

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the youthful population

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outweigh the disadvantages. Even though, there are some positive aspects of having an older

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that we should consider.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?