Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many countries across the world have fixed retirement
age
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of every employee irrespective of physical strength. Some masses perceive that workers above 55 should leave their jobs to make space for young generation. I staunchly agree with
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belief, and my
arguement
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in details. There are myriad reasons to bolster my stand. Out of them, the
prominent
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most prominent
is to boost employment ratio among the youth. To elaborate, as lots of resigns of
old
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older
workers are given,
number
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a number
of vacancies have raised that recruit more fresh people.
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,
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year, the Reliance offered thousand of students of engineering since
plethora
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the plethora
a plethora
of older had left their duty. As a consequence, they earn hefty sums from starting of professional
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;
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;
they enjoy their luxurious
life
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as well. Ultimately, crime rates among them are curbed.
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, it is seen that the young can work more effectively as
compered
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compared
to senior citizens.
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to say, they are more advanced in techniques, updated and techno savvy
,
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and they have good physical and mental capabilities.
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Recently
, companies
surge
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have surged
in production along with quality by using their
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full
strength
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, they show their skills and hidden talents since
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an early age
the early age
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that expands their horizons.
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but not least, retired people are given sufficient pension
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useful to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic needs.
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, there is not
anything
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
wrong if they are patronised to retire at stipulated
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. To conclude, in spite of it is too hard to fix retirement
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for employees, mentioned
age
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can
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
improve
quality
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the quality life
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for young people in order to get tremendous money, adequate experiences and luxurious
life
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. As it is a
beneficial
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benefit
for both younger and companies, it look likes to kill two birds through one stone.

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