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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT PARENTS HAVE THE MOST IMPORTANT ROLE IN A CHILD'S DEVELOPMENT . HOWEVER, OTHERS ARGUE THAT OTHER FACTORS LIKE TV OR FRIENDS HAVE THE MOST SIGNIFICANT INFLUENCE.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It's said that a child's growth is influenced by either his or her parents or other factors like TV and friends.
However
, I believe that the development of children depends on both sides. But the extent of
influence
 is presented in
each part
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present
icular curriculum and I'll show you about that in
this
 following essay. On the one hand, it's obvious those parents are one of the most important parts of their children 's growing who always stand by their kids from a baby to an adult. All of their behaviors, ch
aracter,
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
upbringing is absolutely affected their offspring
thu
s they have a
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offspring, thus
tendency to imitate and obey their parents. Yet the
influence
 from parents
to c
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of
hildren's development b
ases on how
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developmental
 many times parents spent to communicate, to play, to contact with their kids. The more time they spent, the higher extent of the
influence
 they have.
On the other hand
, external factors are likely to be a significant
influence
 on a child's growth, especially TV and friends. Many studies have indicated that the majority of children tends to be i
mpact
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tend
ed by what they watch or hear from a TV program: they want to be a hero when they watch a superman cartoon, or they want to be a bad guy when they come across some action and criminal film
s. Alike
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crime
 with friends, while children are playing together with their friends, they will have a propensity to mimic their friends.
For example
, a kid will insist on being bought the same toy with his or her friends and want to have exactly things like friends. In my opinion, not only do parents have the main responsibility for a child's development, but some outward elements
also
 do reliable work, which accompany with the interaction with children.
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