As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In
this
technological era, technology is developing day by day. Every nation rose up due to advent of that
lots
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lot
of
peoples
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people
purchase own
vehicle
to move to and fro to save their
time
also
reach their destination before
time
.
it
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It
has lots of pros and corns
firstly
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Firstly
, personal
vehicle
helps us to go anywhere at any
time
because you are free to move anywhere according to your schedule without wasting your
time
for waiting public
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waiting for public
transportation.
another
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Another
benefit is that you can feel
relax
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relaxed
, comfortable
also
you can stop at some places according to your preference like if you see some something eye-catching, you stop your
vehicle
and enjoy that place or moment.
Secondly private
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Secondly, private
transportation is free from
huzzle
-
buzzle
move or cause to move energetically or busily
bustle
and noise. On the flip side, buying own
vehicle
is not simple it takes lots of money.
the
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The
main disadvantage of
personal
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personal vehicles
a personal vehicle
vehicle
is that it creates rush on the road
in addition
to that, it creates lots of pollution
for
example in
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example, in
Delhi government pass a law of even and odd number, that helps to decrease the numbers of
privates
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private
vehicles runs on the road to control the pollution and traffic.
due
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Due
to that our environment is polluted
that is
bad for health.
to
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To
sum up,
its
it is
it's
good to buy personal
vehicle but
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vehicle, but
its
it is
it's
used when
its
it is
it's
necessary and use public
vehicle
to go to their work or somewhere.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenient
  • freedom
  • independence
  • status symbol
  • traffic congestion
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • infrastructure
  • public transportation
  • carpooling
  • electric vehicles
  • urban planning
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainable
  • emissions standards
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