IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#three #media #information #comics #books #radio #television #film #theater
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the recent few decades, communication media has changed a lot in spreading information across the world and most preponderant communication mediums are books, films, and television. In my view, there are both merits and demerits for these platforms and
this
Linking Words
 essay will discuss both merits and demerits and state my opinion.
Firstly
Linking Words
, as we already know many films have drawn inspiration from books or novels and produce a film, which is telecasted in the television sets.
In addition
Linking Words
, we can see that the different medium comprehends each other and work hand in hand for transmitting information.
For example
Linking Words
, a recent survey informs that televisions have become essential need and people are eager to know activities across the globe. Needless to say, to have instant awareness multimedia play a key role in transmission of news.
Secondly
Linking Words
, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of communication media. When it comes to books, we know that it is time consuming and passing information to one and another is time consuming;
however
Linking Words
, films and television production values have increased and to cope with
such
Linking Words
 increases more commercials are required.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, the gain instant popularity and rating channels are spreading bad news compared to social welfare news.
Hence
Linking Words
, money minded satellite channels and films can make the watching experience worse. In conclusion, as discussed, we can understand that multimedia are time consuming, yet many people show interest in to gain a firm grip on current affairs, watch movies, and read books to enhance their knowledge.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: