You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. in your letter Explain why would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, Noticing your job advertisement in the Australian magazine, I found that you are looking for a person to take care of your child. I am writing

this

letter to express my keen interest in

this

position and request to look favourably upon my application. I am 28 years old and live in Tehran, Iran. I have a bachelor's degree in Health Science from Sharif University. During my study, I was voluntarily working in a kids-take-caring centre for about three years, and I can provide a reference for them if you request.

Therefore

, I ultimately know how to treat

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kids and what their preferences are.

Moreover

, I intend to pursue my education in the mentioned field. So, in case of acceptance, I have planned to study English while I am there. In

this

way, I would be able to acquire the minimum requirements of graduate programs in an Australian university to apply for one of them. I hope I would be able to have the opportunity to live with your family. Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Farhad Shabani

Thu Apr 23 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

194 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

Nowadays the way many people interact why each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relation ship people make Has this become a positive or negative development?

80.Some people beleive that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Fewer young people do farming in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Not enough student chose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What's the effects on society?