Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

There is no denying the fact that

tourism

is growing tremendously in today’s era as travel can broaden your horizons and give you a new perspective

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life all over the world.

Therefore

, some tours which

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to visit some

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places are becoming more popular because

people

nowadays show a bigger

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to see new areas.

However

, there are some

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and

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trend

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both local

people

and the environment. Admittedly, the growth of the

tourism

industry has brought enormous benefits to local

people

. More

tourists

mean greater demand for food, accommodation and services, all of which create job opportunities and help to alleviate unemployment in the

area

.

For instance

, there are some museums for

tourists

to visit to obtain knowledge about the local history and observe some historical relics that

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to one region. The development of

tourism

also

has ripple effects on local infrastructure, with more roads and bridges being built to meet the

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of the

tourists

.

Moreover

, with the development of the

area

, local residents are able to earn a living by selling souvenirs

such

as handicrafts or postcards to visitors.

On the other hand

,

this

trend would merely bring detrimental effects to the environment of the

area

, particularly plants and animal species. A case in point is that

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more gigantic trees would be chopped down by the local authorities to build some huge entertainment parks.The construction of buildings would definitely contaminate the

area

,

thus

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directly to the

life

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of local

people

.

Additionally

, many kinds of rare animals couldn’t escape the destiny of being killed to make exotic dishes to serve the demands of the majority of

tourists

who desired to experience new things in the

area

. In conclusion, the rapid growth of organized

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to remote destinations could bring about advantages to the lives of local

people

but

also

disadvantages in terms of

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. I believe that the government should have adopted

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proper planning and policies for their own

area

to develop

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tourism

in the future.