The media tends to focus on problems rather than positive developments. Some people think that this is harmful to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We can clearly see that
,
Accept space
,
nowadays media
focuses
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focus
more on the social problems of citizens rather than positive improvements in the country. Some people think that displaying the problems through
media
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the media
is about to have harmful effects on the society and people. I personally feel that discussing the main concerns and finding a possible solution to them are beneficial for both the nation and individuals.
However
, people should be informed about the positive changes as well. Talking from one side, I can say that, these days there are
number
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a number
of talk shows that are specially organized for the problems of society. They invite people with issues and
there thoroughly discuss
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they're thoroughly discussed
they're thoroughly discussing
they're thoroughly discuss
they'll thoroughly discuss
they've thoroughly discussed
they thoroughly discussed
them. During the discussion candidates from different organizations and public consultants give their viewpoints and help a person to deal with it.
Additionally
, issues
are are
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
more likely to end up with
possible solution
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a possible solution
in the end when they are announced to the public rather than
kep
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keeping
kept
secret. Plus, it encourages major public organizations which work with the population to work more efficiently. Looking from
different angle
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different angles
a different angle
, positive improvements interest the population more than the problems. When we are informed about the recent positive progress of our country, we feel more satisfaction and proud. Many people realize that, they are going to be offered better living facilities and job standards and
this
inspires them to move
further
. Our discussions above show that, when problems are displayed to the public and discussed, they are about to have successful endings with solutions and
this
can
also
partially contribute to the development of a nation.
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