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food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by their farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Each place in the world blessed with nature by one way or
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. Even though urbanization brought
myriad
Suggestion
a myriad
 of good things, it absorbed a major portion
fertilizable
capable of being fertilized
fertilisable
fields
Suggestion
field
. Nowadays, it is quite difficult to satisfy the dwellers with the indigenous
food
 items.
However
, a faction of people argued that local purchase will help the farmers. I partially agreed with the local purchase of
food
 items. It is a fact that, economical development of a place is mainly depends on the circulation of money.
For instance
, if a sales transaction in a particular place will rotate the money there only.
In addition
 to that, goods from far places will be
costly
Suggestion
more costly
costlier
 than the locally available goods because it included with transportation cost, carrying cost and other costs.
Besides
, it curtails the pollution by avoiding the vehicles.
Moreover
,
populace
Suggestion
the populace
 will get a chance to buy fresh
food
 items if they are purchasing it from indigenous market.
Nevertheless
, most of the time local production may not be enough to satisfy the needs of local people. Taken over of agriculture fields
are
Suggestion
is
 one of the main causes of
this
 problem.
Furthermore
, people get a chance to experience alien
food
 items as well as it will remove the barrier between places.
Also
, the economy will benefit through the export and import of goods. Above all, these kind of buying curb the scarcity of some places in a large extend. Having analysed both views of the topic, it is stated that though indigenous producers of
food
 items benefited from local selling, most of the time people have to depend other places to satisfy their needs. Full dependence on local markets is unpractical in
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
 of places so, it is justifiable to depend on other places.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmentally friendly
  • carbon emissions
  • long-distance transportation
  • biodiversity
  • pesticides
  • fertilizers
  • local economy
  • sustainability
  • feasible
  • diverse range
  • food choices
  • cultural identity
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