Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree
Some
people
think that volunteer
work
which is useful to the community, should be mandatory on
teenagers who study at high school. I completely disagree with that opinion Change preposition
for
due to
several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in my essay.
First of all, although
nowadays it is not common in
teenagers joining to Change preposition
for
volunteer
work
, it imposes this
work
it
not the key way to solve Correct your spelling
is
this
problem. In other word
, Change the wording
another word
other words
teach
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teaching
students
advantages and how much
important to help other Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
, this
makes Correct pronoun usage
apply
students
like volunteer
work
. For instance
, if would teach
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teaching
students
volunteer
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that volunteer
work
helps to improve community
, it will outcome we have a generation of teenagers Add an article
the community
like
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who like
help
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to help
people
and will stay like
help Change preposition
to
people
after finishing school. Instead
of generation compulsory to do, help people
and In the future, this
will lead to avoiding voluntary work
. One class in week
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a week
specified
for educating the student about Add a missing verb
is specified
volunteer
work
more useful of
mandatory.
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than
Secondly
, the high school Rehabilitation students
to university, so their students
do not have enough time for doing volunteer
work
, especially for weaker students
, so make
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making
volunteer
work
compulsory It
will negatively affect Correct pronoun usage
apply
students
. For example
, if the students
spent
a lot of time Wrong verb form
spend
for
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apply
volunteer
work
such
as working for charity, improving the neighbourhood and clean
roads, Replace the word
cleaning
then
did
not achieve to good degree Wrong verb form
they do
that’s
will lead to Verb problem
which
avoid
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avoiding
students
volunteer
work
.
In conclusion, I think encourage
the Wrong verb form
encouraging
students
to do volunteer
work
and educate
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educating
him
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them
how
is important, it will be more useful than Change preposition
on how
make
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making
volunteer
work
compulsory.Submitted by sltanking583 on
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