Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some
people
think that
volunteer
work
which is useful to the community, should be mandatory
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teenagers who study at high school. I completely disagree with that opinion
due to
several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in my essay. First of all,
although
nowadays it is not common
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teenagers joining to
volunteer
work
, it imposes
this
work
it
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not the key way to solve
this
problem. In
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,
teach
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teaching
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students
advantages and how
much
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apply
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important to help other
people
,
this
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makes
students
like
volunteer
work
.
For instance
, if
would teach
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students
volunteer
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that volunteer
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work
helps to improve
community
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, it will outcome we have a generation of teenagers
like
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who like
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help
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to help
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people
and will stay
like
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help
people
after finishing school.
Instead
of generation compulsory to do, help
people
and In the future,
this
will lead to avoiding voluntary
work
. One class in
week
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specified
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for educating the student about
volunteer
work
more useful
of
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mandatory.
Secondly
, the high school Rehabilitation
students
to university, so their
students
do not have enough time for doing
volunteer
work
, especially for weaker
students
, so
make
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volunteer
work
compulsory
It
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will negatively affect
students
.
For example
, if the
students
spent
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a lot of time
for
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volunteer
work
such
as working for charity, improving the neighbourhood and
clean
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roads,
then
did
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not achieve to good degree
that’s
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will lead to
avoid
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avoiding
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students
volunteer
work
. In conclusion, I think
encourage
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the
students
to do
volunteer
work
and
educate
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him
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them
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how
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on how
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is important, it will be more useful than
make
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making
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volunteer
work
compulsory.
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