It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In a modern
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, a relation between tradition and
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is a key issue that affects society. Many people believe that traditional values and
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are incapable of coexisting. I partially agree with
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opinion. While it may be true in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected by the
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and the modern
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. On the one hand, it is clear that
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has brought many changes to our society. The process of industrialization in developed countries has certainly contributed to the disappearance of
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a traditional way
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of life.
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, before
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developments, people lived in small villages, where they shared customs and traditional values.
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, developments in transport, communication and infrastructure led to the disappearance of the traditional
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of life as people moved to the cities. Nowadays, traditional cultures in those countries were lost due to the influence of
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.
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, in some parts of the
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traditional cultures
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people have survived. There are many countries in the
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that still maintain their cultural values. One explanation might be that those countries are less influenced by modern
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. A good example of
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is most countries in Africa that are untouched by
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technological
developments. These communities have continued to hunt and gather food from the forest.
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, other less developed countries
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countries have found a
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to balance between
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development
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and keeping traditional values. In conclusion, along with the
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technology
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technological
developments, many countries lost their traditional
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of life.
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, there are countries where the
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did not influence. I believe it depends on whether we speak about developed countries,
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countries or undeveloped countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inevitable
  • traditional cultures
  • technological development
  • modern society
  • incompatible
  • decline
  • traditional crafts
  • rituals
  • digital communication
  • preserve
  • promote
  • documentation
  • online archives
  • virtual museums
  • social media
  • coexist
  • integrates
  • digital storytelling
  • augmented reality
  • cultural tourism
  • perspective
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