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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In a modern
world
, a relation between tradition and
technology
 is a key issue that affects society. Many people believe that traditional values and
technology
 are incapable of coexisting. I partially agree with
this
 opinion. While it may be true in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected by the
technology
 and the modern
world
. On the one hand, it is clear that
technology
 has brought many changes to our society. The process of industrialization in developed countries has certainly contributed to the disappearance of
traditional
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a traditional way
way
 of life.
For example
, before
technology
 developments, people lived in small villages, where they shared customs and traditional values.
However
, developments in transport, communication and infrastructure led to the disappearance of the traditional
way
 of life as people moved to the cities. Nowadays, traditional cultures in those countries were lost due to the influence of
technology
.
On the other hand
, in some parts of the
world
 traditional cultures
between
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among
 people have survived. There are many countries in the
world
 that still maintain their cultural values. One explanation might be that those countries are less influenced by modern
technology
. A good example of
this
 is most countries in Africa that are untouched by
technology
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technological
 developments. These communities have continued to hunt and gather food from the forest.
In addition
, other less developed countries
such
 as
third
world
 countries have found a
way
 to balance between
develops
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development
developer
developers
 of
technology
 and keeping traditional values. In conclusion, along with the
technology
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technological
 developments, many countries lost their traditional
way
 of life.
However
, there are countries where the
technology
 did not influence. I believe it depends on whether we speak about developed countries,
third
world
 countries or undeveloped countries.
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