Some people suggest that sport helps people learn about teamwork, but others say it can encourage to be too competitive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Sport is a kind of a

game

, competition or activity needing physical effort and

skill

that is

played or completed according to the rule in order to entertain or practice. Some people believe that playing sports may inspire to be too competitive;

however

, others say it helps people build

teamwork

skill

. In

this

essay, I am going to give my point of view about the 2 mentioned perspectives, and I believe that sports do help people when they work collaboratively. On the one hand, some players involved in a competitive sport always want to win the

first

prize.

Hence

, when their ambition to become winners is too strong, they may compete unfairly or do everything to win the

game

. To be more specific, players possibly use drugs before joining the

game

to keep them always strong during the competition, or some of them may attack other opponents deliberately to send them out of the

game

because of the serious injury.

In addition

, for reputation or popularity, they might spend a huge amount of money buying the trophies or winner cups, and they just attend the games as normal without any

hesistation

indecision in speech or action

hesitation

as if they did not know anything about the purchase. The participants who perform these acts are likely to be suspended from other games in

future

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the future

. On the other hands, people may know how to work well with others when being members of a

team

. It is clear that most members in a

team

will collaborate with others to play or complete their games.

As a result

, they probably get to know how to express their ideas to contribute to the whole

team

’s strategies.

In other words

, when a conflict occurs, they possibly communicate

to

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with

each other effectively to manage the argument, or they can share their views in a very easy way to understand, which helps their

team

overcome all disagreements among members.

Furthermore

, when working in a group, each participant might learn to listen to others’ opinions which are even object to theirs.

This

gives them an opportunity to gain new skills or experience from their teammates because no one is perfect themselves without acquiring knowledge from surrounding people, and

also

the ability to control their own feelings and egotism. It does make each individual contribution to the whole

team

greater.

Consequently

, every member is more close-knit, which helps them achieve their common targets more easily. In my opinion,

although

some people are willing to pay any price to be the winners, even do bad things, I do believe that playing sports

brings

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bring

people together, and

also

provides them with a chance to improve their

teamwork

Accept comma addition

teamwork, skill

skill

if they are mentally strong enough to get them out of the temptation of winning because sports are for

teamwork

and good health. To sum up, everything comes with its 2 sides;

nevertheless

, that its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages or not depends on how people do with it.

Thus

, sports can result in positive impacts on people, particularly their

teamwork

Accept comma addition

teamwork, skill

skill

if they take part in sports with the spirits of the willingness to learn new things rather than being the winner.