Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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, I disagree with the opinion expressed, I would like Linking Words
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by pointing out that ‘traditional skills and Linking Words
ways
of life’ are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community. In many Use synonyms
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, the history of civilisation is the history of Use synonyms
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: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet we have been moving on from previous Use synonyms
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of doing things. Some technologies, Use synonyms
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as weapons of mass destruction, Linking Words
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as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional Linking Words
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, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. Linking Words
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, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmon; it can now be ordered from, and delivered to, anywhere in the world. In conclusion, without suggesting that all Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite