You bought a ticket for a music concert. You’re unable to attend the concert. You want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to give him the ticket. In your letter, Give detailed information about the concert Explain why you’re unable to attend the concert Tell him how to get the ticket

Dear John, I hope you are doing well, I am writing
this
letter because maybe would you like to go to the Hans Zimmer concert? I bought a
ticket
last
year but I can not go, it would be great if you accepted my gift. The concert is on 16th of the July in New York and the main event starts at 7 A.M. I know you are a big fan of
this
music and I am sure you will have a great time.
Additionally
,
ticket
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include one beer in the bar so you will not be thirsty. Unfortunately, I can't go
due to
my work, I have an important meeting that day and I have to go to Toronto, so as you see it is impossible to be in two places at the same time. If you agree I will send you an email with the
ticket
, everything is digital, so you don't have to print anything.
Furthermore
, the
ticket
has no name, so you will not have any problem getting there. I hope you will agree and we will meet soon and you will tell me everything. Yours sincerely, George.
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accuracy
Ensure all proper names and titles are correctly capitalized, such as 'Hans Zimmer concert' and 'July'.
depth
Provide a bit more detail about why the work meeting is important to strengthen your reason for not being able to attend the concert.
tone
The letter maintains a friendly and consistent tone suitable for writing to a friend.
structure
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it easier to follow the flow of information.

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