You bought a ticket for a music concert. You’re unable to attend the concert. You want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to give him the ticket. In your letter, Give detailed information about the concert Explain why you’re unable to attend the concert Tell him how to get the ticket

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well, I am writing

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letter because maybe would you like to go to the Hans Zimmer concert? I bought a

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year but I can not go, it would be great if you accepted my gift. The concert is on 16th of the July in New York and the main event starts at 7 A.M. I know you are a big fan of

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music and I am sure you will have a great time.

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ticket

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include one beer in the bar so you will not be thirsty. Unfortunately, I can't go

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my work, I have an important meeting that day and I have to go to Toronto, so as you see it is impossible to be in two places at the same time. If you agree I will send you an email with the

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, everything is digital, so you don't have to print anything.

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, the

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has no name, so you will not have any problem getting there. I hope you will agree and we will meet soon and you will tell me everything. Yours sincerely, George.

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accuracy

Ensure all proper names and titles are correctly capitalized, such as 'Hans Zimmer concert' and 'July'.

depth

Provide a bit more detail about why the work meeting is important to strengthen your reason for not being able to attend the concert.

tone

The letter maintains a friendly and consistent tone suitable for writing to a friend.

structure

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it easier to follow the flow of information.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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