The tables show the number of mobile phones sold in millions of for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant

The table describes that a number of mobile

phone

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phones

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were sold in millions between 2006 and 2012. There are divided into three groups; one is that the number of mobile

phones

sold

of

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Nokia and Ericsson went up

in

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about 2

years

before going down, and

while

the

quantity

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number

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of mobile

phones

sold

of

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Motorola tended to decrease significantly from 2006 to 2012, the two brands left had

opposite

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trend. Beginning

of

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selling 345 and 74

million

in 2006, and it was about 2

years

later that the

figure

increased to 475 and 102

million

respectively

was

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were

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tendency

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the tendency

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of Nokia and Ericsson.

However

,

this

trend was gone down in

years

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the years

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left.

Therefore

, in 2012,

this

group had the

lowest sold

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lowest-sold

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mobile

phones

with 335 and 28

million

in the older given. In 2006,

a

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the

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number of mobile

phones

sold

of

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Motorola were 210

million

,

and

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it

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which

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is about 7 times as many as the

figure

in 2012.

In contrast

, the quantity of mobile

phone

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phones

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sold

of

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Samsum

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Samsung

and

IPhone

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iPhone

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had

tendency

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a tendency

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to increase quickly between 2006 and 2012. To be more specific, the

figure

of

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Samsum and

IPhone

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iPhone

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began from 117 and 0

million

to 396,5 and 135,8

million

in

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apply

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turn. That meant the

figure

of

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for

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Samsum and

IPhone

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iPhone

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were

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was

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nearly 3 times and 136 times as many as for a period of six

years

.