Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way? Do you think this is a good trend?
Extreme activities are most popular among most people
such
as high speed cars and bike racing and water sports. Despite many risk a
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tatus. Personally, I think that pleasure overcomes the danger, especially if it is accessed or controlled.
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is to say that these games allow people to become the global celebrities which in turn leads to adrenalin rush a
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the adrenaline rush
adrenaline rush
For example
, the racing drivers are the people who undergo such
a high risk condition; however
, they are willing to do it repeatedly due to the rewards they received through it.
In my humble opinion, these games are effective and productive with appropriate tools. By this
I mean, lots of accessories are available to protect players from dangerous situation.
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dangerous situations
the dangerous situation
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In other words
, reading books and blogs of people who succeeded and failed while trying them will help people to create list w
hat and what not to do.
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lists
cetera.
However
, one should be circumspect about the danger of such
activities and better fellow safety, guidance and train well in advance before practicing them.Submitted by rajdeep927 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite