In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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The majority

of the people consider that adolescents getting involved

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in

part-time works during their off time as a positive growth, because it aids the students to be self sufficient.

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, others oppose

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as it may lead

themselves

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them

to lose their interest

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in

academics. Even though there are few demerits in

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regard, I believe part-time jobs

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need

to be uplifted as it not only aids them to be less dependant, but

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makes them familiar with

real world

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the real world

. Most of the

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nation

nowadays are providing feasibility to their youth to pursue part-time career in parallel with their studies.

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makes the students to earn their living expenses and

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gather hands experience which increases their confidence levels.

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, most of the part-timers tend to manage their living

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cost, including

tuition fees from their

earnings which

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earnings, which

in turn reduces the economic burden in their families, particularly low income groups.

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, students can become self sustained and actively pursue their dreams.

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, some of the

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one who estimates officially the worth or value or quality of things

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consider that getting acquainted to

earning

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earn

money at the tender age makes them neglect their studies and provokes them to earn more by

side-tracking

a short stretch of railroad track used to store rolling stock or enable trains on the same line to pass

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academics.

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in turn leads them to drop out of school. Researches say that part-time culture is one

of significant reason for

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significant reason for

the rise in high school dropouts.

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, to tackle

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problem, they believe that there needs to be a restriction on allowing part-time works. In conclusion, students need to be encouraged to do part-time jobs considering their family background.

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, their parents must ensure that their study curriculum should not be distracted due to their working hours.