You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#minutes #bar #information #car #journeys #city #centre #residents #non-residents #summarise #features #comparisons
The chart provided gives information about how many trips
was
performed by individuals who stayed residential and out of Change the verb form
were
residential
area Add an article
the residential
during
Change preposition
for
a
quite less than Correct article usage
apply
decade
(1996-2005).
Add an article
a decade
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of travels done by nonresidents went up considerably until Linking Words
Westgage
street and Park line approached Correct your spelling
Westgate
to
the traffic.
Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, Linking Words
figure
belonging non-residents climbed dramatically in the first four years Correct article usage
the figure
that
accounted for more than 8,000 trips Correct pronoun usage
which
wheres
journeys of hotel clients dropped significantly in 2000 Correct your spelling
where
due to
parking limits in the city Linking Words
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, in 2003 on which mentioned streets closed to traffic, both figures dropped, especially nonresidents reduced journeys to Linking Words
city
Add an article
the city
center
Change the spelling
centre
that
dropped up to the lowest number Correct pronoun usage
apply
that is
three thousand whilst it rose again annually compared with vibrations made by residents in 2003 and 2005.Linking Words
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