In the past, people used to wear their traditional clothes depending on their culture. Nowadays the trend is changing and people wear different clothes. Is it a positive or negative development? How does it affect certain societies and people’s behaviour?

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The table compares the
sale
Suggestion
sales
figure of
coffee
, tea, pastries, and sandwiches, in a
coffee
shop in a building on a particular weekday from 7:30 in the morning to 8:30 in the evening. Overall, the total
sale
of
coffee
is more than any other food items.  As per the
sale
the underside of footwear or a golf club
sole
count of beverages,
sale
of
coffee
is maximum during the
first
3 hours since 7:30 am, as 265 cups are being sold. The figure drops to 185 and 145 during the
next
6 hours and jumps to 200 by the end of the given period. A similar trend is followed by tea, which
first
drops from 110 to 35 cups after every three hours, and rises to 75 cups during 5:30 to 8:30 in the evening. Moving towards the
sale
of the other two food items, people prefer to eat pastries far more than sandwiches, as only 50 sandwiches are being sold as compared to 275 pastries between 7:30 am to 10:30 am. 
However
, after every 3 hours, the trend gets the opposite. Between 10:30 am and 2:30 pm, 200 sandwiches are sold, around double to that of pastries.
In contrast
, over 40 sandwiches, 150 pastries during 2:30 pm to 5:30 pm, and 80 and 110 pastries and sandwiches
orderly
Suggestion
ordered
after 5:30 pm.
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