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Do you agree that university education should be free for everyone

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University
education
 requires a very high
tuition
 fees which a very few students are able to afford. According to some people there should be free
education
 so that every student can get a
university
tuition
. In my opinion, I agree that
university
education
 should be free as it can lead to extensive development of both individuals and
society
. Putting an end to
University
 fees provides equal opportunities for both rich and poor irrespective of their background. The present situation tells us that a large proportion of the
society
 is unable to attend higher
education
 solely due to a high fee structure, which ultimately creates discrimination towards lower
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
 groups in the
society
. As a modern
society
, we should condemn
this
 type of injustice by granting free
education
 to all. Another benefit of giving free higher
education
 would be that students no longer have to work and study at the same time as they do to cover their
tuition
 fees. A
demographical
of or relating to demography
demographic
 study suggests that half of the students in the UK work to cover their
university
 fees. Abolishing the
tuition
 fees will lead to more focus on studies and produce excellent results.
Finally
, in a long run
this
 will help the
society
 to develop and prosper as a whole. A free tertiary
education
 tends to uplift a majority of the population having financial constraints and
thus
 helps
society
 to advance. The productivity of the nation will increase owing to a large number of skilled and knowledgeable population via free
education
. In conclusion, a free
university
education
 is in many ways beneficial and should be considered a must if a country wants to establish equality and to advance in terms of development. The cost of free
education
 will easily be recouped many times over by the benefits it brings.
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