The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Omnipresent, online shopping becomes enormously popular. Some vibe that the rising of electronic shopping will lead and traditional store closing in towns and cities.

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essay will discuss in details if online shopping is trendy, but why not ending traditional shop in town.

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and foremost, our society has all most 35% population is a senior citizen who is love going to shop in a traditional shopping plaza. They are like to buy goods with physically.

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, I am shopping generally online, but my father goes in the

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and brings fresh fruits, vegetables and grocery goods.

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, old people going to the

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the world of commercial activity where goods and services are bought and sold

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to meet with friends and time passing. That way, the shopping

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is a very crowded place in towns as well.

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, holiday trend, whole family leisure time passing in a shopping

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. Because of nowadays majority people busy for office or business that’s why, when get the time they are going outside. In cities,

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not enough place, that's why the multiplex shopping

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is a comfort zone

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there gets many things space.

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, currently multiplex market is enhancing elevated.

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, the Daily Star Newspaper reveals that

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five-year increase of 25% shopping plaza owing to boost people to market for shopping, eating, watching movies and others. If, accretion a rapidly online

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popular traditional

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in cities. In conclusion,

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essay discussed traditional stay in towns since old people like shopping physically and holidays to get together with family.

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, undoubtedly online shopping is a superior nowadays, but shopping

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never stopping in cities for very popular and entertaining place.

Fri Apr 24 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
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showrooms
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

"Air pollution in major cities is a significant issue. What are some potential causes of this problem, and what strategies can be implemented to tackle it?"

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