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Some people think that it is important for children to learn lessons outside the classroom by visiting public buildings. In what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Usha, I hope everything fine with you. I'm really thankful to you for your invitation and for your hospitality. We had a good time.
Last
 week was one of the best days in my life. I'm sure, I will plan
next
 time at my place. Reason for writing
this
 letter is that unfortunately, I left my wallet at your house. I hope you already found it, if not, I remember I left that on the desk
next
 to my bed in the guest room. It contains really important personal cards, bank cards and a little amount of cash. It is really hard here to survive without those cards. If you can, please send it back to address which is 2/15, Gwelo street, Vic, 3018. You can use post which is the cheapest and fastest one. Express post to my place cost ten to fifteen dollars and it will deliver within four days. I will pay for the charges. Sorry for troubling you. See you soon. Your's lovingly Dheeraj
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