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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

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Introduction
The job of a
supervisor
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 requires a lot of preparation and the strong attitude in caring about the quality of work. The most relevant qualities of a
supervisor
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 will be analysed in the following paragraphs, supported by specific details and examples.
Body paragraph 1
Firstly
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, one of the most important characteristics of a
supervisor
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 is the perfect comprehension of the nature and dynamics of the work he has to manage with.
Furthermore
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, the
supervisor
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 is a manager who leads the work of a group of people, so he has to be comprehensive on errors and at the same time, he has not to lose the control over his subordinates, letting them
do
engage in
make
unrepairable
impossible to repair, rectify, or amend
irreparable
 mistakes. That's a really challenging task that I'm experiencing
this
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 current year like
responsible
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the responsibility
responsibility
 of a group of research which represents the University of Padova in a European competition called Solar Decathlon.
Body paragraph 2
Another fundamental quality that makes a good
supervisor
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 is the capacity of judging equally all the subordinates' works,
instead
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 of being preferential towards the ones which respect more his ideas. The quality
also
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 includes his/her focus to the deadline and attaining excellence in the team. Supervising a group of people with a strict rule is not always possible and more leadership qualities, in
this
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 case, are essential. Being able to keep balance in the team and observing the progress while learning from the past mistakes three other qualities each good
supervisor
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 should have.
Conclusion
In conclusion, a
supervisor
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 has to be perfectly acknowledged on the tasks he's working with and he has to be a leader strict but right
at
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in
 the eyes of his subordinates.

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