The followig diagrams show a current map of peyton park and a plan for proposed changes.
The maps show what Peyton Park looks like now and what it will look like after the proposed changes are made .
On both maps , there is a
lake
at the center
of the park . Both maps Change the spelling
centre
also
show a parking lot to the south of the lake
. Now Peyton Park has tennis
courts
to the west of the lake
and a picnic
area to the north of the lake
. The picnic
area is also
close to the tennis
courts
.
When the proposed changes are made , some things will be moved , and some new things will be added . The tennis
courts
will be moved to the east end of the lake
. The picnic
area will also
be moved . It will still be near the tennis
courts
,
but to the northeast of the Remove the comma
apply
lake
. A swimming dock will be added at the west end of the lake
. There will be a playground to the north of the lake
, where the picnic
are
is now .Correct your spelling
area
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