televison and internet have brought revolution in the field of communication and entertainment, but their excessive use has negative impact too. discuss both the views.

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Television
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internet
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technology is the backbone of todays
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we cannot imagine
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without it, but there are some disadvantages too.
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Television
Televisions
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and entertainment are a necessity of our todays
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because everyone has there on job and busy with that so after that they wants to relax in that day
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broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
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the internet
make them enjoy.
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, there are lots of side effects too due to more
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broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
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we cannot manage our time and we cannot finish our work on time. But
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is todays necessity because
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the internet
can help in communication for international business
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internet
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can make faster we wore and less requirement of employers so we can make a profit in less investment. In 90 percentage of business is only depends on
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the internet
and in education sector student take more help from
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while online learning courses. So we cannot imagine
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without
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the excessive
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is very disaster for students' career and they cannot achieve their goal,
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more
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