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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre

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From the early history, the communication was the most needed requirement among the societies. There has been changed and enhanced by mankind. In the modern communities, the people have found a different form to connect to peers with media
such
 as
book
,
radio
 and television.
However
, all media has no influence as similar as others due to most of drawbacks and benefits. The
book
 was the historical communication from the ages.
Thus
, most of the people prefer
book
 for basic education or entertainment.
However
, crafting the
book
 is very complicated and destructive from the onset.
For instance
, paper, glue and ink are the basic supplements for the crafting a
book
 and all supplements consume natural resources.
In contrast
, the people claim that books are the best way to keep the information for the other generations. Unfortunately, there is not enough to spread information rapidly. The
radio
 is a different acceptable way to spread info via using voice and sounds. In the beginning of the 19th, the people could communicate with the
radio
 after the invention. Every night, people gathered around the
radio
 and heard the news. Today, there are a considerable options in the media. Because the invention does not include complex part and convenience of crafting method.
However
, the data flow to one way. So that, most of people do not choose listening
radio
. The television is invented in the mid 19th. Most of people attended that technology due to visual feature. Currently, The television is placed in the hub of the house of the household because of countless channel and diversity.
Therefore
 the audience can find a suitable channel according to preferences.
However
, most of the people suffer which is the addition of the TV set habit. In conclusion, all media have benefits and drawbacks. But, some media tools have an effect on our lives.
Radio
 and TVs are preferred by huge communities.
However
, except
radio
, the TV more suitable to spread information than other media tools due to addiction and visual feature.
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